Book Review: The Girl on the Volkswagen Floor by William A. Clark

The Girl on the Volkswagen Floor
by William A. Clark
Bantam Books
Copyright 1971
168 pages

Rating – 6/10

Summary – Now this is an odd little true-crime book. On the surface, it’s an account of the 1968 murder of a young Ohio woman. But on another level, author Clark’s attempts to solve the crime lead him into the murky world of ESP. Though not bad, this book is one that you can “take or leave.” It’s worth a look if you are a true-crime fan and you run across a copy.

Review – A while back, I came across an online database that The Mystery Writers of America (MWA) have established that lists all of the books that have been nominated for the MWA’s Edgar Awards over the years. (The website is: I was intrigued by the title of The Girl on The Volkswagen Floor – a 1972 nominee for the Best Fact Crime Award – and read about the book online.

A few months passed. Then, the day after Christmas, my wife, sister, and I headed over to Atlanta and I found an old, dogeared copy of Volkswagen at The Book Nook in Decatur. (One of my favorite bookstores). When I scanned the book, I saw that the first few pages quoted glowing reviews from heavy-hitters such as the LA Times, the San Francisco Chronicle, and writer Stanley Ellin. My high expectations went even higher. When I checked out, the clerk couldn’t find a price, so he charged me a quarter. Happy Day! 🙂

So after all of that buildup, how is the book itself? Perhaps my expectations were too high. While, Volkswagen is “pretty good,” I would say that it never gets into high gear.

The murder covered in the book is tragic, but such stories are far too common. In 1968, a young teacher named Barbara Ann Butler was found murdered in her Volkswagen Bug outside a store in the Dayton, Ohio-area. Crowds of shoppers contaminated the crime scene and the small police department was unused to handling such cases. Soon the case went “cold.”

Stymied on all fronts, police told Clark that he could contact some Dayton locals who claimed that they had knowledge of the case through ESP. (The police wanted Clark to make the contact so that they would not be open to criticism). The paranormal angle plunges Clark into a strange world and heightens the story’s drama. The book concludes with a nice “twist”, though readers will have to decide for themselves how well Clark handles it.

Clark can “turn a phrase” and the book includes some nice writing, but, at times, he is insensitive to the victim, Barbara Butler. For instance, the following passage starts with an offhand reference to Clark’s murder, but ends with a vivid description of the pool area at her apartment complex:

“I… walked over to the pool to see what was going on in the recreation area that Barbara Butler had left three days before to go to the store and die. … It was a warm, sunny Saturday afternoon and the pool area was crowded with swimmers and sunbathers. They all had the look of unmarrieds-under-thirty. Several young men were having a game of water football; several young girls appeared sound asleep as they worked on their tans; no one seemed frightened; no one seemed to care that one of his or her former co-tenants and poolside regulars was on an embalming table being prepared for burial” (p. 22).

The worn paperback that I bought has a tasteless cover. The front cover depicts a body lying under a cloth in a parking lot with a VW in the background. The back – also shot in the parking lot – has a photo of an arm dangling out the front door of the same VW. To add insult to injury, neither picture accurately depicts what happened.

Unless you are a fan of the paranormal, Volkswagen is not a book that you should make an effort to find. Still, true crime fans can enjoy this one – provided that they don’t get their hopes up too high.

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3 Responses to Book Review: The Girl on the Volkswagen Floor by William A. Clark

  1. mark Page says:

    I lived where that murder happened and knew the number one suspect. He is in prison now for another murder that occurred in the same time frame. I could tell you other stories about him.

    • Micaela Trimbach says:

      My uncle was the suspect in this murder. He was found dead hanging in the woods off Kemp road before it came to trial

  2. BiggerThanHT says:

    I hesitate to add a comment here, but Miss Butler was my 8th grade science teacher. She was very capable, very encouraging, and also very caring towards her students. Our class once went on a field trip to an outdoor location. I failed to to bring a jacket, and to keep warm, resorted to leaning on the hood of a vehicle that brought us to the site. She really couldn’t help me ( other than call 911, which did not exist at the time ), but she kept near me, talked to me, and seemed almost like a frustrated Mom who had no options available.

    In class, she wore very nice clothing, some of which had her monogram BAB (her middle name was Ann). Being 13 at the time, I was more intrigued by her than having a crush on her. She styled her hair very nicely and I definitely thought she was pretty. Now I consider her most beautiful based on my memory of everything about her.

    Next year, going into 9th grade and after I learned of her death ( I did not know all the sordid aspects ) I was in a kind of denial that she was gone. But, at that age, 14, life marches on, so I just went on with my life, but I never forgot my science teacher that had taken me under her wing because of her concern for me. I was very small in the 8th grade and she knew I was being picked on (today we call it bullying). She never let me be bullied in her class.

    I LOVE Ms. Butler!

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